This is the third in the series of title screens I'm making for my game Metanoia. This is the third one though, I might put the others up later.
Anyway, this is supposed to be after the event where you kill someone's dog that suddenly went berserk. It's hard to express emotions with the overworld sprites, so the title screens are supposed to convey how the moment was. Is that bad? I think so.
Constructive criticism, and any tips, are encouraged.